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Post by DontWantNever on Sept 18, 2004 20:55:31 GMT -5
I love this song and its I tried but you wouldnt let it work theme
here's my stab at the lyrics challenges are welcome..........but dont hear any bacon or embecillic
PS It's is without a doubt PW NOT tommy singing
You came to live with me The rent is cheap that way Gave you all my space You close my closets
The torn up photographs Of girls I never knew Got you wishing I’d grow up and marry you
Tried to make this your home
Boxes in a storage space And room for all your things One day you’ll be upset You’ll get a bigger place
Let you wear my robe You didn’t like the smell Gave away my bed There’s nothing wrong with it
Tried to make this your home Yes I tried to make this your home
Something’s got to give And I can’t throw it all away There’s some memories I’d like to keep And some things I can’t change
Tried to make this your home Yes I tried to make this your home Yes I tried to make this your home Yes I tried to make this your home
Take it come on Make it your home
Tear this heart of mine You can have it if you like Take it all
Take it all
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Post by Schmoo on Sept 19, 2004 9:41:47 GMT -5
Here's what I heard, what is different from what you have:
"Gave you all my space, you chose my closets"
I heard "try" versus "tried" in the choruses. It works either way, but "try" iin the present tense still leaves some hope for the situation versus "tried" which insinuates it's already over. Very interesting.
"One day you'll feel safe, we'll get a bigger place"
You helped me out on the line "Tear this heart of mine", I was stumped on that one.
I agree, another great song.
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Post by DontWantNever on Sept 20, 2004 15:06:58 GMT -5
Thnaks for the correction..however I think the whole song is kinda a past tense last ditch effort from the male protagonist to the fermale as if he were saying, "I've done everything , but you wont allow things to change" Gonna try to work on Learn How to Fail wanna help on that one
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Post by Schmoo on Sept 20, 2004 18:23:36 GMT -5
Here's what I got from Learn How To Fail. My copy isn't the best quality and Paul slurs a little, so there are some spots here that I'm sure aren't correct, but it's the best I could do. I'll be interested to see what you have. At any rate, you've made me get out my copy of "Vomit", and for that I thank you.
Sand without a pail In a box with your hands in the well Little toes and colds Soon it won’t be long Don’t worry what you’re told That’s my loss No Easter Bunny and no Santa Claus First you must learn how to fail Before you’re allowed to do anything real First you must learn how to fail
You’re growing up much too fast Soon you’ll be dating Boys that laughed at you Pulling pigtails Whatever they’ll be wearing You’ll pretend you’re on the rail Sand without a pail Playing with me until I’m too deceived First you must learn how to fail Before you’re allowed to do anything real First you must learn how to fail Before you’re allowed to do anything real
First you must learn how to fail Before they will let you do anything real First you must learn how to fail Before you’re allowed to do anything real In time now First you must learn how to fail How to fail How to fail Don’t worry baby, you’ll do just fine Don’t worry baby, everything’s fine
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Post by scoOter on Sept 21, 2004 8:17:19 GMT -5
these are two first class songs. that is all.
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