Visitor's Day - 49:00

[Kathy]

Starts at 10:37 (perhaps this song could only be written by a man who doesn't drive and has to depend on the driveness of others)


Well it wouldn't hurt you to see your grandma
Every now and then, I'm sure your ma would drive
Don't bother visiting my father
Since they laid him out yonder, when he died

You could try calling one of your aunties
Leave a message, tell them you want me to be surprised
But I wouldn't be upset
If they were taking care of their pets
And there was no reply

On Visitor's Day, I'd love to hear you say
"I miss you Daddy,you were on my mind"
On Visitor's Day, in my cell, I'll stay
If I don't see you, I'll figure you couldn't get a ride

You can count on your uncle
Call when he's drunk, he'll
offer you a lift anytime

Then once he's thrown up
You'll know he'll never show up
Cause he's waiting til you cry

On Visitor's Day, I long to hear you say
"I miss you Daddy,you were on my mind"
On Visitor's Day, in my cell, I'll stay
If I don't see you, I'll figure you couldn't catch a ride

Ain't nothing sadder than hell
Than staying in your cell on Visitor's Day
All the way to Visitor's Night

On Visitor's Day, I'd love to hear you say
"I miss you Daddy,you were on my mind"
On Visitor's Day, in my cell, I'll stay
If I don't see you, I'll figure you couldn't get a ride

By the time you get your license
I'll be up for parole twice and
twice denied
Maybe it's better you're only 11
You can lie all you want without having to look me.......


then it overlaps with and goes into "Thoroughbred"

[ndesimon]

On my first listen, I mistook 'cell' for 'cellar'.

Or did I?

[A Regular]

Does anyone even know the song titles, are is it first come, first served on appointing a title?

[Kathy]

Jul 22, 2008 16:11:55 GMT -5 A Regular said:

Does anyone even know the song titles, are is it first come, first served on appointing a title?

"Everyone's Stupid" and "Outta My System" existed before so that makes them easy...I don't think we'll ever see an 'official' track list so we can all make up our names if we want!

[butzodaddy]

I hear the last line "maybe it's better you wrote me a letter, then you could lie all you want without having to look me in the eye".

Love it.

[Kathy]

Jul 29, 2008 15:18:45 GMT -5 butzodaddy said:

I hear the last line "maybe it's better you wrote me a letter, then you could lie all you want without having to look me in the eye".

Love it.

Oh that makes a lot more sense!

[Veets]

Nice job. Here's a few suggestions.

If they were taking care of their pets (parents?)

offerpromise you a lift any time

Cause he's waiting til You'll sit and wait until you cry